Comments for alice2hofe's Blog http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Wed, 13 May 2009 13:47:11 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Improved Evaluation by mrtaylorpeace http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2009/04/29/improved-evaluation/comment-page-1/#comment-13 mrtaylorpeace Wed, 13 May 2009 13:47:11 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=37#comment-13 Much improved with a better understanding of representation. Much improved with a better understanding of representation.

]]> Comment on Magazine Analysis ‘Super Super’ by mrtaylorpeace http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2009/04/23/magazine-analysis-super-super/comment-page-1/#comment-12 mrtaylorpeace Wed, 13 May 2009 13:41:50 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=20#comment-12 Clear analysis of a similar text with effective use of media terminology. Articulate response. Clear analysis of a similar text with effective use of media terminology. Articulate response.

]]> Comment on Questionnaire Results and Audience Profile by mrtaylorpeace http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2009/04/23/questionnaire-results-and-audience-profile/comment-page-1/#comment-11 mrtaylorpeace Wed, 13 May 2009 13:38:48 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=24#comment-11 Detailed breakdown of target audience. Detailed breakdown of target audience.

]]> Comment on Magazine Brief by mrtaylorpeace http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2009/04/23/magazine-brief/comment-page-1/#comment-10 mrtaylorpeace Wed, 13 May 2009 13:37:01 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=26#comment-10 Appropriate ideas with a clear sense of target audience. Appropriate ideas with a clear sense of target audience.

]]> Comment on Evaluation by mrtaylorpeace http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2009/04/27/evaluation/comment-page-1/#comment-9 mrtaylorpeace Mon, 27 Apr 2009 21:11:17 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=35#comment-9 An appropriate evaluation but fairly limited. On your final post you need to: T - use magazine terminology when explaining how you have followed and developed the conventions of magazines; T - you need to make closer and more explicit reference to features from your magazine; T - what have you learnt about page design since the prelim task? T - decide who would publish your magazine and why? T - you need to explain in detail how you have represented the band; T - finally, use media terminology and theory where appropriate. An appropriate evaluation but fairly limited. On your final post you need to:

T – use magazine terminology when explaining how you have followed and developed the conventions of magazines;
T – you need to make closer and more explicit reference to features from your magazine;
T – what have you learnt about page design since the prelim task?
T – decide who would publish your magazine and why?
T – you need to explain in detail how you have represented the band;
T – finally, use media terminology and theory where appropriate.

]]> Comment on School Magazine by mrslearmont http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/2008/11/20/school-magazine/comment-page-1/#comment-5 mrslearmont Sun, 23 Nov 2008 19:37:23 +0000 http://alice2hofe.edublogs.org/?p=8#comment-5 Excellent front cover Alice, colour scheme, images and font work well together and detailed analyis shows in-depth understanding of appeal to audience.Contents page, although consistent with theme, is difficult to read and does not fully follow conventions. T - make sure your final designs are clear and easy to read. T - Excellent front cover Alice, colour scheme, images and font work well together and detailed analyis shows in-depth understanding of appeal to audience.Contents page, although consistent with theme, is difficult to read and does not fully follow conventions.
T – make sure your final designs are clear and easy to read.
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